Dana
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Dana
Jun 23, 2008 9:28:44 GMT -5
Post by Dana on Jun 23, 2008 9:28:44 GMT -5
Name: Dana
Race: Saiyan
Current Planet: New Vegeta
Sex: Female
Age: 12
Aura color: Black
Description: Has long brown hair with brown hair. Her tail is brown like her hair and eyes. Normally wears Saiyan armor, the older type. When she gets really angry her eyes normally turn bright red.
Attacks: Shadow Ball, Black Storm, Shadow Blast
Bio: Failed experiment by Freiza's scientists. After being claimed a failed experiment she was shipped off in a cooling chamber to Frieza's homeworld Icca. Being frozen for over one hundred years she excaped and ended up on Planet Vegeta. There she is secretly plotting a way to assinate Prince Vegeta.
Alignment: Evil
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Dana
Jun 24, 2008 0:55:13 GMT -5
Post by Kafuji, Dock on Jun 24, 2008 0:55:13 GMT -5
Mind making atleast a paragraph? ^^. Add a little more to your physical description. And also, you have a few errors in your profile, So a spellcheck might help. Also, Can you add a description to your Ki attacks? Thats all, then you should be approved.
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